2015年11月25日 星期三

A Secret Paradise

 

 
The pedestrian besides the Siyu road is a real-existing paradise for me. Walking on it, I can see the blue sky as long as I raise my head and hear the sound of the soft wind gently swapping by the branches of the tree on the top on me. “Rustle, rustle”. The feeble sunlight then scatters down slowly on my face like my mom’s hand touching and warming me. Due to the breeze that acts like a mischief child, the leaves, which originally stay still and curiously observe human, slightly falls down on the pedestrian. The wind also brushes my cheek tenderly, making me relish a lot.

  Besides, next to the pedestrian is a school. Passing by here will usually accompany the sound of chatting and giggling. The scene of children playing basketball and jogging at the sport field always attracts my full attention and easily stimulates my passion on sports. On the pedestrian, it’s often filled with the falling leaves. Series of crispy sound are created when walking on them. It seems that someone is eating potato chips expertly. How interesting it is!
And right near the pedestrian is Siyu road. Not at the peak of traffic, there are few cars passing by. However, occasionally, some car might drive as fast as the speed of roller coaster! Their engines may seemingly sound like a sick granny with husky voices. Also, it makes people feel hungry when walking with the appealing aroma cross from the road. There are stores whose dishes mesmerize people to enter in and have a wonderful meal there.

  Through my senses, I feel the nature greeting with me with a big smile every day. This pedestrian invariably brings me lots of surprises and a sense of tranquility. It is a dreamy heaven in the real world!


1 則留言:

  1. Pay attention to whether nouns are singular or plural and add 's' to plural ones
    The potato chips, husky voiced grannies, mischievous child and roller coaster are great images.
    Hints: sidewalk; sb. has passion for sth.; real-life; mischievous; When sth. is not at its peak; sth. is accompanied by sth.

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