Besides, next to the pedestrian is a school. Passing by here will usually
accompany the sound of chatting and giggling. The scene of children playing
basketball and jogging at the sport field always attracts my full attention and
easily stimulates my passion on sports. On the pedestrian, it’s often filled
with the falling leaves. Series of crispy sound are created when walking on
them. It seems that someone is eating potato chips expertly. How interesting it
is!
And right near the pedestrian is Siyu road. Not at the peak of
traffic, there are few cars passing by. However, occasionally, some car might
drive as fast as the speed of roller coaster! Their engines may seemingly sound
like a sick granny with husky voices. Also, it makes people feel hungry when walking
with the appealing aroma cross from the road. There are stores whose dishes
mesmerize people to enter in and have a wonderful meal there.
Through my senses, I feel the nature greeting with me with a big
smile every day. This pedestrian invariably brings me lots of surprises and a
sense of tranquility. It is a dreamy heaven in the real world!

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回覆刪除The potato chips, husky voiced grannies, mischievous child and roller coaster are great images.
Hints: sidewalk; sb. has passion for sth.; real-life; mischievous; When sth. is not at its peak; sth. is accompanied by sth.