Walking on Siyu Road is like taking a wonderful trip to refresh
those various and invaluable memories in my heart. This road has accompanied me
for many important periods in my life, like childhood and adolescence, for at
least 20 years. It is near my home, so I almost pass by it every day. That’s
the reason why it plays a crucial role in my mind.While I was in kinder garden,
my mom held my tiny hand tightly and walked to school with me along this road
every morning. At that time, I cried hard and told my mom that I hated to go to
school. Mom would pat my head lightly and comforted me gently.When I was in
junior high school, I enjoyed the opportunity to stay alone. Unlike other
classmates waiting for their parents eagerly, I went home by myself, cherishing
the freedom to appreciate the beauty of the surroundings in slow pace.Then, I became a senior high school
student. My friends and I would discuss lots of topic, such as gossips, college
selection and dreams for future, on our way to have a dinner. Our giggling and
chatting sound seemed to scatter to every corner on this road.Now, I am in
college. I hardly stay at home like I used to be. Every time go back to
Luodong, I take a walk along this road and share some interesting and
unforgettable experiences at school with my parents. Parents always listen to me
carefully and smile satisfactorily, making me realize that happiness can be
quite simple.I have left my footprints here. Siyu road carried all kinds of my
precious memories. Therefore, walking on the road is as going on a trip to
recall those priceless moments of my life.


Your description makes me feel like I was there on this road and feel your memories!
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The sentence about leaving your footprints is great. Quite poetic, and full of symbolism.